Dirty Martini

Thin Walls - VIDEO

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Dear Readers- Please view our pilot "Lips Video," an unusual erotic retelling of Aimee Herman's short story "Thin Walls". We welcome your feedback and constructive criticism - so please leave your comments below! xxoo Jordan and Samantha
Originally published May 2009

Comments

• Will Belegon
  5/1/2009 6:46:56 AM

  I like it. I can imagine it getting mesmerizing. It is a nice accompaniment to the audio and the story without creating distractions and still allowing the reader/listener to imagine the story in their own mind.
• Peter Rosier
  5/1/2009 9:01:41 AM

  Very unusual and compelling way to present a story. It IS gripping, I can imagine many authors would love to have one of their stories told in this way. I would for a start.
• Kim
  5/1/2009 9:32:14 AM

  I LOVE it! I enjoyed watching those sexy lips while listening to the story. Sometimes I got taken away and shut my eyes to listen, other times, I was enchanted by her mouth. What an interesting combination!
• Jade
  5/3/2009 5:45:05 AM

  I have to admit that I am a True Voyeur at heart! Though I truly enjoy listening or reading anything that has to do with Sex! I found that I was able to sit back relax and listen without having to do anything. I just loved it! Thanks Jade =^.^=
• dy!
  5/7/2009 6:58:21 AM

  those totally amazing lips turn me on so much when she reads! it feels like the story is real as it happens, she even does that billy idol lips curl thing that so hot! great performance!
• BellaB
  7/21/2009 1:01:00 AM

  That is so amazing. She is a beautiful woman who exudes sexuality!! The story is perfect for those lips. Please get this girl to do a monthly reading!!! Rawr.
• radrose
  12/29/2009 12:55:35 AM

  I 'm waiting to sede it and hear it!
• Stephanie
  12/29/2009 9:06:07 PM

  I like the idea, it's a great concept. I don't love her reading though. It's a little rough with strange emphasis on the wrong parts. I think it would be absolutely to die for with a little coaching before it's recorded, maybe a few people together to see how emphasizing different parts of the sentence changes the whole dynamic of the story. I also think maybe a little more rehearsing would help so that the story just flows and there is less stumbling. That's just my opinion. : )
• Annie
  1/10/2010 1:00:53 PM

  I really like the idea. As an author, I'd say that I'd definitely be interested in having one of my pieces read in this way. However, I agree with Stephanie that the reading is a bit rough. Too many "oopsies!" moments, which takes away from the story. With a few rehersals, however, I think it'd be great. The girl has a beautiful set of lips, which are great for what's being done.

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