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George's Other Cherry Tree

By: Brett Slocum

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The twenty-year-old George Washington visited his father's estate, strolling through the orchard. He spied a women standing near the skeleton of the cherry tree he killed fourteen years before. Eleanor Bradford had the full bosom and flared hips of a woman of eighteen and a half summers, not the child he had last seen. As she walked to a tree in full bloom and sniffed the pink flowers, her beauty and grace struck him.

George walked toward her, words forming in his mind to tell her of his affections toward her. His words swayed her, and they retired to a hidden area between trees. Kissing and touching led to an impassioned shriek that echoed across the woods, followed by an ecstatic groan. Clothing perfectly replaced, she returned to her home, and George returned to his father's.

"George," said his father, "I was just out on the grounds, when I heard a mighty climax. I saw Eleanor leaving the orchard. Do you know what has happened yonder in the garden?"

"I cannot tell a lie, Father, you know I cannot tell a lie! I did take her cherry with my 'little hatchet'," George replied.

Originally published February 2008

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  • eec
    2/18/2008 10:04:38 PM

    Stupid and condescending. Washington definitely loved and appreciated women, but this story is just a cheap joke.

  • JLR
    2/18/2008 10:27:09 PM

    Samantha and I picked "George" as a fun flash-fiction piece in honor of president's day. A romp in the field indicates a true appreciation for women. Keep commenting, we love to hear your thoughts naughty and nice. xoxo JLR

  • Reader
    2/19/2008 11:36:03 AM

    Is that why you deleted my negative comment from yesterday?

  • JLR
    2/19/2008 12:56:28 PM

    Didn't delete it, we had to reboot the system and some things were lost in the interim. I didn't even see it. Please repost if you wish. xoxo JLR

  • Brett Slocum
    2/19/2008 3:15:44 PM

    Yes, it was a joke. So, it delivered exactly what is was supposed to deliver. Thank you for your comments. BTW, my comment to "Reader" also got deleted. In it I said something similar to, "Whether you like my story or not is unimportant. But don't judge an entire site based on a single story of less than 200 words."

  • Brett Slocum
    2/19/2008 3:17:02 PM

    P.S. A favorable comment was also deleted, so it's not like O&C was squashing dissent.

  • JLR
    2/19/2008 7:06:07 PM

    Hey Brett, Lovely to hear from you! Too bad we missed out on all the excitement during yesterday's reboot! Ah well... Looking forward to publishing your next piece in honor of the 4th of July. Hopefully it will inspire some dialogue as well. xoxo JLR

  • Cassie Exline
    2/26/2008 5:16:00 AM

    The story delivered in 200 words and kept the reader in that era. Loved the last line. Very pleased George kept true and didn't lie. lol

  • JLR
    2/26/2008 11:06:16 AM

    Isn't it wonderful what some writers can manage in 200 words?! Flash fiction is definitely a difficult genre, and Brett executes it with aplomb. xoxo JLR

  • CCD
    4/5/2008 7:02:34 PM

    Is it really true that you post as the virulent, anti-semitic santeria_claws3 on the Yahoo Israel-Paliestinian message board?

  • Patricia O'neill
    1/9/2009 11:45:54 AM

    Adorable! and clever too. ....Patricia

  • brettslocum
    8/18/2009 1:19:31 PM

    Thanks! Anything for my adoring public.

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