Oysters & Chocolate


Poetry

What I Need

By: Sabina Tolchovsky

Tags: Erotic Poetry

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Tighter still,
leave a mark.
Something to look at when it's over,
something to feel when your gone,
something to linger.

The beauty of knots
died rope
red like blood.
Just below the skin,
aching to feel;
make me...

Speak to me
in whispers with force-full demand.
My ears need to hear...
what you want,
what you will do,
what you will claim.

Tremble,
anticipating your
tempting tease.

Is this how you want me?

Honey'd skin,
sweet flesh,
velvet tounge.
Bound.


Originally published March 2006 - "Straight Lines and Sexy Curves"

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  • Alex Belojica
    2/23/2010 4:32:35 PM

    please forgive me for 'bombarding' you with commnets but having asked you where I can see more of your exqusite work i have just found this. Erotic poetry never does it for me....until now, until this.........God its good, i can feel the the ropes, the knots, the ache of pleasure and bondage, it echoes the story 'Need' and just reinforces what you can do with words........I am very very impressed, really I am. 'Tempting tease...velvet tongue..............bound.. More , more, more please!!!!!!!!! The primitive power of total submission, I am helpless for it!!!!!!!!! Understand you might not as a rule correspond with fellow writers but if you can....love to hear from you and discuss your work, you must have lots I haven't read but best wishes anyway.......and PLEASE don't stop creating such erotic turn on literature........the world needs a talent like yours, trust me! Alex XXX

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